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LadyCee this is beautiful, I am so honored that you got inspired by my li'l poem, but what you have done here way surpasses my effort. You are so talented my friend, I loved the images and the way you told your story through the metaphors. It was just wonderful and a very interesting read. Great post!!
posted by
Sinome
on April 12, 2008 at 9:34 PM
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LOL Didn't you somewhere say you had writers block????
This is fantasic and so much effort been taken. Love it
posted by
Kabu
on March 17, 2008 at 8:07 PM
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majesticvisions
TYTY so much!! I am so glad to have you here - honored!
Cee
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on March 16, 2008 at 12:04 PM
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a wealth of inspiration and knowledge here. Great thoughts.
posted by
majesticvisions
on March 16, 2008 at 4:21 AM
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Bhaskar
My dear, I hope you read this response to your wonderful comment. I have worked all day to clarify and simplify my analogies. What seemed so clear last night seemed a jumbled up mess by the light of day. It is still not perfect by any stretch; I have trouble with my passive voice and what not. But I KISSed it, I HOPE! Thank you, wonderful, brilliant man, for your time to read my soppy blog! You DO revere we women, I know that!!
Cee 
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on March 16, 2008 at 12:18 AM
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WOW - Lady Cee -- I'm so speechless.
You by no stretch of the imagination have a form of block whatsoever. This just flowed --- and it flowed to me the reader as prose, poetry...just plain Excellent ~ and the meaning - such valuable worth, as you strung the pearls of wisdom so delicately. Okay...I'm impressed. 
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 15, 2008 at 7:26 PM
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Excellent post !
posted by
afzal50
on March 15, 2008 at 6:59 PM
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Hi Cee, the Lady
Writer's constipation ....well, that's a good and picturesque term to use. Just reminded me 'verbal diarrhoea'. Gels well with constipated thoughts and verbal diarrhoea. See how easily sometimes are thoughts put into words. The best I think for a writer is to pen his thoughts, that is, fingers on the keyboard, and write just as he would speak. Yet another simple method is K I S S Keep It Simple and Stupid for all to understand. And all this you have written so well. Kudos~
Today, by dwelling on the very subject matter of your comment, I have given a post, dedicating it to you ...
http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/Bhaskar.ing/529662
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 15, 2008 at 5:19 PM
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Samantha39
Thank you! I'm over it -- most of the time. I was inspired by the poem.
Cee
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on March 14, 2008 at 5:09 PM
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you compare things i never would have thought of good job
posted by
Samantha39
on March 14, 2008 at 3:21 PM
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