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What a lovely image you just brought to mind!
very well done, thank you

posted by mariaki on March 17, 2008 at 8:21 AM | link to this | reply

Well said !

posted by afzal50 on March 16, 2008 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

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oh to be a child again with pure creativity!  nicely captured moment.  thank you.

posted by bluebossa on March 16, 2008 at 6:14 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on March 15, 2008 at 7:55 PM | link to this | reply

Re: this is heart warming
Thank you, writerspirit, for your nice comment.

posted by cpklapper on March 15, 2008 at 5:57 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem and beautiful picture you painted for us dear poet, it is heart warming in this day and age of cynicism and coldness to find someone so into his family.  Those li'l ones are lucky to have a daddy like you :-) Thank you for sharing this with us :-)

posted by Sinome on March 15, 2008 at 5:42 PM | link to this | reply

glare of the sun...you are something dear Carl...admirable...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 15, 2008 at 8:40 AM | link to this | reply

This is a nice image...

posted by saul_relative on March 15, 2008 at 12:45 AM | link to this | reply

this is heart warming

posted by Thomas_Cornish on March 14, 2008 at 8:26 PM | link to this | reply

Re: awwww
Thank you, Elyse.  I can still see their faces, so focussed on their creation in the glare of the sun, and the smocks so fully covering them.

Carl Peter


posted by cpklapper on March 14, 2008 at 8:03 PM | link to this | reply

Re: nice look backs
Thank you, Samantha.  They were special times.

posted by cpklapper on March 14, 2008 at 8:00 PM | link to this | reply

awwww...this is too comforting, precious ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 14, 2008 at 6:16 PM | link to this | reply

nice look backs

posted by Samantha39 on March 14, 2008 at 3:41 PM | link to this | reply