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posted by
QuailNest
on March 15, 2008 at 5:29 PM
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Hagi...I wanted to make sure you get this :)
Trust me, no hurt feelings were gained because of your comment. I know exactly what you mean. And re-reading the story as many times i've had...everything you've said to me has registered. Everytime I read I think ...the characters are there...but they need to be more devloped. Because it seems you only get to know who they are through what they say....not how they think. I know exactly what you mean. And trust me...I appreciate everything you have said. I know it still needs some work, but I wanted to put it on here to get people's inputs. My boyfriend has been reading it....steadily 
....but he has to be nice. I am definitly trying to incorporate the additions you suggested in the sequel. I have a couple more chapters of it written....but it's on my file at school....which probably means on not focusing on my school work as much as i should be 
Thank You So Much 
posted by
serendipity09
on March 15, 2008 at 8:58 AM
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