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posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 16, 2008 at 5:27 PM
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this is a piece that is very alluring
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on March 16, 2008 at 2:25 PM
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"Time castles the hastening moments" Time as a castle..lovely image and interesting thought..makes me think. Great ideas here.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 16, 2008 at 1:15 PM
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hmmmmm
posted by
QuailNest
on March 16, 2008 at 12:06 PM
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"Something is whispering in agony"---what an intriguing line.I love this.Ch
posted by
Scramble
on March 16, 2008 at 10:15 AM
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Kayzzaman, I love the way this poem begins. After the first four lines, it could have gone any direction at all, but you brought it home in a fascinating way.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 16, 2008 at 10:04 AM
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I agree, very moving. Thank you
posted by
tiredofchangingmyname
on March 16, 2008 at 9:48 AM
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"Unlettered and unsung all the while" --- my what a moving poem - and of conjugal love ~ this is stunning Poet...
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 16, 2008 at 9:40 AM
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Highly romantic !
posted by
afzal50
on March 16, 2008 at 8:02 AM
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posted by
Samantha39
on March 16, 2008 at 6:09 AM
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depth
the lengthening shadows of night will laugh... your poem is drenched with juxtaposition and deepest passion. you have a gift indeed!
posted by
bluebossa
on March 16, 2008 at 5:50 AM
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Very good! Harpo47.
posted by
Harpo47
on March 16, 2008 at 5:32 AM
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