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Re: RavenCailleach and Samantha39
Thank you both for the cool comments and for coming by.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 17, 2008 at 10:23 PM
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nice one
posted by
Samantha39
on March 17, 2008 at 8:43 PM
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I like it!
Makes me picture myself there watching another time another place.....
posted by
RavenCailleach
on March 17, 2008 at 8:03 PM
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Re: Shams_i_Heartsong
Thank you for the kind comment and for stopping by!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 17, 2008 at 7:52 PM
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Re: Troosha
Thank you for the great comment and for stopping by. (means a lot that you liked it)
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 17, 2008 at 7:47 PM
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Re: Ash
Thank you Ash for all the kinds words. I am glad that you liked it. Thank you too for stopping by.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 17, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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Re: Soul_Builder101
Thank you for the cool comment and for stopping by. Glad you liked it.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 17, 2008 at 7:40 PM
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NICE ..... thank you
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on March 17, 2008 at 10:46 AM
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wigopa
You took me there to the moment... What a wonderful piece!
posted by
Troosha
on March 17, 2008 at 9:35 AM
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Marion, I felt like I was watching a scene from a western movie...
so vivid...and look at all those comments below..I feel so proud of you, sweetie..glad you came out of your hiding and started sharing your talent with others..I shall be reading you :) ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 17, 2008 at 9:34 AM
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Very dramatic piece! Loved it!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 16, 2008 at 10:04 PM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you so much for the awesome comment (means a lot) and thanks for stopping by.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 16, 2008 at 9:52 PM
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Re: Rhisiart_inside_out
Thanks for stopping by and for the cool comment.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 16, 2008 at 9:51 PM
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Re: Cheugon
Thank you so much for the great words and for coming by.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 16, 2008 at 9:49 PM
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Re: ger_musser
Thank you for coming by and the nice words.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 16, 2008 at 9:48 PM
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Beautiful Marion, so romantic, I love this longer more narrative poem, you are very talented, Luuuuuuuuuved it!
posted by
Sinome
on March 16, 2008 at 9:16 PM
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Mystery and Intrigue

Nice effect - I enjoyed reading - thank you
posted by
Rhisiart_Inside_Out
on March 16, 2008 at 8:17 PM
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I love the haunting imagery...
...creating a aura of mystery and suspense.....to be relieved at the end with romantic discovery! Outstanding!
posted by
metalrat
on March 16, 2008 at 8:09 PM
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The imagery of this poem is fabulous. Wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.

Ger
posted by
ger_musser
on March 16, 2008 at 8:04 PM
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Re: spinner
Thank you for stopping by and for the great comment
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 16, 2008 at 7:36 PM
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Re: Purple_Mermaid11
Thank you for the awesome comment, (means a lot coming from a good writer like you) and for stopping by.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 16, 2008 at 7:36 PM
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Re: Livinglifelarge
Thank you for coming by and thanks for the great comment!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 16, 2008 at 7:35 PM
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excellent read
posted by
spinner
on March 16, 2008 at 6:40 PM
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so much clarity in imagery here my dear wigopa...rider/fog/cloak.great journey here dear...

posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 16, 2008 at 5:59 PM
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Very nice!
I'm glad I stopped in and I look forward to more
posted by
tiredofchangingmyname
on March 16, 2008 at 5:45 PM
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Re: Elyse
Thank you so much for the awesome comments. It is great to hear wonderful stuff like this from such great writers! Thank you so much.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 16, 2008 at 5:10 PM
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Re: Teddypoet
Thank you for the great comment and for stopping by!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 16, 2008 at 5:09 PM
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Re: Scramble
Thank you Chris for the great comment! It warms my heart to come from such a great writer! Thank you so much for stopping by.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 16, 2008 at 5:08 PM
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Oh wow...this is stunning imagery...as a vision the fog - and the chemistry that sparked when their eyes met...well, This is quite the poem. Bravo!!! Take a bow

Elyse


posted by
elysianfields
on March 16, 2008 at 3:29 PM
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Fantastic...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 16, 2008 at 2:37 PM
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Hi wigopa-Wonderfull! I can see why Ash mentioned you and your work!Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 16, 2008 at 2:20 PM
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