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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 17, 2008 at 12:35 PM
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Ah! An emotional flow ~as a stream of consciousness - this tugged at my heart... We say things, we do things, and then yes, we question at the end...of intentions ~ This left me moved and pondering. Very good! Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 17, 2008 at 6:43 AM
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Nice ending!
So I stand here,
Looking in the mirror.
Am I really much better than you?
Only time will tell............
I love how you tied everything up in the end. Although this stands out the
most to me.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 16, 2008 at 9:34 PM
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