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Totally mesmerizing my friend!
excellent work; thank you
posted by
mariaki
on March 19, 2008 at 3:39 AM
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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 18, 2008 at 3:57 PM
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Kayzzaman--I have read this twice--I somehow felt drawn into it/involved
with it!I can't quite explain it! Mesmerising? Magnetic? Not sure.


A fascinating pice of work! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 18, 2008 at 2:02 PM
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Nice,,very good...thanks for visiting my blog earlier
posted by
Samantha39
on March 18, 2008 at 1:24 PM
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Impressive piece, almost musical.

joab
posted by
joab1
on March 18, 2008 at 12:47 PM
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I have read this poem three times and I agree with Troosha, I felt like you were saying to me! It is just incredible my dear friend! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 18, 2008 at 11:08 AM
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WOW!!!
posted by
tyleness
on March 18, 2008 at 8:39 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on March 18, 2008 at 7:19 AM
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very special....
posted by
Star5_
on March 18, 2008 at 6:14 AM
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Kayzz
I was rivited by this piece... I can't quite put my finger on what drew me in but I sat quietly and abosrbed each and every word as though I could hear you speak them.
posted by
Troosha
on March 18, 2008 at 6:07 AM
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