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I hope they can communicate with you
posted by
pen_dragon
on March 19, 2008 at 9:34 AM
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ty
Sometimes it's hard to do (to walk away) but we have to listen to our hearts.
posted by
Troosha
on March 19, 2008 at 8:53 AM
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Catch 22..........
It took me 29 years to actually take that step......... do it now but leave the hurt and bitterness behind and start living; God bless
posted by
mariaki
on March 19, 2008 at 4:00 AM
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Highly passionate and profound !
posted by
afzal50
on March 18, 2008 at 7:13 PM
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Very good! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 18, 2008 at 3:08 PM
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Games are no good!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 18, 2008 at 3:01 PM
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Ty dear...
honestly though, ultimatums do not work...there is nothing stopping you from starting to walk in a direction that will make you & your kids happy..give him time to figure out himself and what he wants..and stay open to love..hope my friendly advice helps ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 18, 2008 at 2:31 PM
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Nice rhyme and flow...
...he'd better catch you...before you go! Well done!
posted by
metalrat
on March 18, 2008 at 2:20 PM
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Well done tyleness! Compact and direct--! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 18, 2008 at 2:15 PM
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This has the voice of 'no drama - straight to the point' Love me - very well written
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 18, 2008 at 1:16 PM
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Good words, well said
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 18, 2008 at 12:36 PM
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It's all or nothing now...
In just a few words, you have managed to place a lifetime. Thank you for this poem.
joab
posted by
joab1
on March 18, 2008 at 11:40 AM
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