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I must say this is the most beautifully orchestrated poem of egress I have read. Although poignantly sad, a masterpiece nonetheless! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 19, 2008 at 11:48 AM
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Beautiful and Sad
Sort of like Andersen's Little Mermaid.
And get well.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on March 19, 2008 at 9:24 AM
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a love eternal
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posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on March 19, 2008 at 7:35 AM
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I've had a few of these myself.....
a few that creep back into my mind....beautiful expression, dearest!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on March 19, 2008 at 6:55 AM
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Haunting is right.
Very lovely, and haunting, for sure. Good work, Mermaid!
posted by
strat
on March 19, 2008 at 6:16 AM
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Hauntingly sad, Mermaid...
posted by
saul_relative
on March 19, 2008 at 12:26 AM
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Enchanting
your vulnerability brings depth to your words
posted by
jefco
on March 18, 2008 at 10:27 PM
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Very intriguing piece! I guess I might as well stop trying to understand some things!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 18, 2008 at 9:43 PM
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What a beautiful heartfelt poem. who ever he is, what ever he did, he is an idiot not to have taken advantage of a love like yours. Who sends away their heaven, who is he that in his arrogance that does not realize he has it all? Don't worry sweetie, the time will come when he will regret having let you go. and you will find someone that appreciates you as you should be appreciated, like the princess of the sea that you are, my sweet purple mermaid. You concentrate in getting better and don't worry about earthly things. Angels like you are above us mortals' problems. Take care of you, promise please. I remain forever your friend.
posted by
Sinome
on March 18, 2008 at 9:38 PM
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I just loved your calling card and thank you sweetie for being such a dear
posted by
Kabu
on March 18, 2008 at 9:34 PM
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Health is the best to remember..
Take all the time you need, you must be healthy we all wish it. I will keep you in my prayers. Get well soon!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 18, 2008 at 9:13 PM
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sorry you're not very well am thinking of you with love and concern
posted by
Kabu
on March 18, 2008 at 8:46 PM
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you know how to pull on the emotion of other, wow amazing work
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on March 18, 2008 at 8:35 PM
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Beautiful and passionate !
posted by
afzal50
on March 18, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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Jen dear, take good care of your sweet self...
though we'll all miss you & your writing, your health comes first..take care and may God give you strength..see you later, best, Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 18, 2008 at 7:27 PM
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To all my beloved bloggers, it's a very difficult time right now for me emotionally and health wise...please forgive me if I won't be able to read or get back you all today. I shall read all of you as soon as i can...Thank you so much my beloved ones. Thank you all! my love always; Jeanie
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 18, 2008 at 7:15 PM
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So true, no regrets ~ This is so beautiful Jen, in the music, the mood, the words so touching ~ and then of course, You ~ Lovely, Poetess - you are
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 18, 2008 at 6:44 PM
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