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Thank you all
I am still pretty new at writing (I have always buried creative urges uner the media laced lobotomy that is television) so I am trying new approached and new styles, I believe that a great poem should not only souch the reader it should be memorable, different.  Most difficult is that it should not only embody the subject but it should represent the writer.

 

I have read a lot of your works (and will read more), though I comment little (hehe believe it or not I'm actually pretty shy :P ) and so the reactions and comments from poets of your calibre on a finished poem  is as valuable to me as the inspiration which allows me to start it.

 

Thank you for reading and reacting and have a wonderful day 

posted by lionreign on March 20, 2008 at 3:55 AM | link to this | reply

The imagery is outstanding, a very beautiful poem!!!  sam

posted by sam444 on March 19, 2008 at 11:09 AM | link to this | reply

your word choices in this piece were quite surprising...
enjoyed reading it.

posted by FineYoungSinger on March 19, 2008 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

Lion

How very, very beautiful.....

posted by Troosha on March 19, 2008 at 9:31 AM | link to this | reply

Let love be wide awake for you

posted by Kayzzaman on March 19, 2008 at 6:10 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written;
excellent flow and imagery; thank you

posted by mariaki on March 19, 2008 at 4:57 AM | link to this | reply