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In Hastenings Moments of Death and Darkness
Nice poem!

posted by Oosthuizen on March 21, 2008 at 6:30 AM | link to this | reply

my dear kayz.............


posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 20, 2008 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

Passover/Easter blessings

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on March 20, 2008 at 3:49 PM | link to this | reply

Oohm, this took me to a fictional time and place
of dark forces amassing for the battle ahead. Dragons, and a dark queen in armor leading legions of evil minions. Excellent imagery indeed!

Cee

posted by LadyCeeMarie on March 20, 2008 at 9:44 AM | link to this | reply

Kayzzaman
I love the spiritual depth and realness of your poetry. May the energy of Spring Equinox assist to awaken a cycle of renewal within you. Peace.  

posted by wordjewels on March 20, 2008 at 7:20 AM | link to this | reply

Kayzzaman ~.~
Beautifully written - great imagery... very mysterious, lonely. Thank you for sharing.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on March 20, 2008 at 6:52 AM | link to this | reply

Kyzzaman
A good poem, but please let not the dark night of the soul overtake you.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM | link to this | reply

purple shadows lengthening
we are not worthy!  deep, so deep.

posted by bluebossa on March 19, 2008 at 5:26 PM | link to this | reply

"Purple shadows lengthening in deep death of darkness"-This is Beautifull
Kayzzaman! Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 19, 2008 at 1:39 PM | link to this | reply

great poem
Thanks for taking me there

posted by Jack_Shackleton on March 19, 2008 at 1:30 PM | link to this | reply

I was captured by the incredible imagery! Extremely poignant!  sam

posted by sam444 on March 19, 2008 at 12:20 PM | link to this | reply

that's so beautiful..

posted by Star5_ on March 19, 2008 at 10:16 AM | link to this | reply

Kayzz
Great imagery but very dark today....  Still a great read!

posted by Troosha on March 19, 2008 at 10:12 AM | link to this | reply

A few petals of old fossils near by
Silencing ashes of fire

I liked these two lines! Great Job here!

posted by Wigopa_ on March 19, 2008 at 10:02 AM | link to this | reply

I read and believe I get the drift....but not the whole picture! Maybe I need some coffee!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 19, 2008 at 6:54 AM | link to this | reply

I can see it!
Superb imagery.....!   Daisy

posted by Daisy92959 on March 19, 2008 at 6:36 AM | link to this | reply

I can only imagine this would be such a journey ~ stunning in your imagery and good poem, Poet ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 19, 2008 at 6:28 AM | link to this | reply

Good Morning........I enjoyed the read....

posted by Corbin_Dallas on March 19, 2008 at 6:16 AM | link to this | reply