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Futility in eloquent imagery!  sam

posted by sam444 on March 19, 2008 at 2:13 PM | link to this | reply

Great effort! Reality rolls on!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 19, 2008 at 12:10 PM | link to this | reply

Good poem
Lovely reading.

posted by Kayzzaman on March 19, 2008 at 10:10 AM | link to this | reply