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Excellent - I enjoyed the read
Very nice your words took me there.
posted by
Rhisiart_Inside_Out
on March 22, 2008 at 12:53 PM
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Excellent, Jack. Provocative...
posted by
saul_relative
on March 21, 2008 at 8:44 AM
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beautiful verses
posted by
Star5_
on March 21, 2008 at 8:04 AM
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Beautifully written! You obviously have talent!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 20, 2008 at 11:17 AM
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Great poem and astounding imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 20, 2008 at 10:28 AM
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Wow!
He told it so beautifully that I
Felt his pain.
You have told it well your self. You pulled me into the moment. I could almost hear the man speak. Well done!

posted by
Wigopa_
on March 19, 2008 at 11:29 PM
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