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You have me hooked! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 21, 2008 at 10:03 AM
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I like this and it's style. I'll surely be around to see where it leads, he's on track. but she seems lost. olhip
posted by
olhip50
on March 21, 2008 at 9:38 AM
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"He makes life worth while..wild and free"...
sounds like a real man :)..go with him..is this going to be the next one of your short poetic strory series, Ty ?..if so, this is a good start..and i wish you lotsa inspiration..please feel free to have me review whenever you feel like it..will make my travels that much more interesting :)...Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 21, 2008 at 9:30 AM
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woooooooo..........that sounds like a mystery....
posted by
Star5_
on March 21, 2008 at 8:05 AM
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you left us wanting more
I'll be looking for the continuation. I must say though I get queasy around possesive characters or stories. you have an excellent opportunity to freak me out.
posted by
Kobriel
on March 21, 2008 at 7:08 AM
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tyleness
this is sad so far
posted by
Lanetay
on March 21, 2008 at 6:59 AM
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tyleness ~.~
As the drama unfolds... (I cant wait for the rest!)
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 21, 2008 at 6:57 AM
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