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It is a treacherous slide down and sometimes we cannot get back to light...
posted by
Winged
on March 23, 2008 at 1:37 PM
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I wanted to wish you a Happy Easter....
...This is a beautiful and thoughtful read
posted by
VictoriaP
on March 23, 2008 at 11:16 AM
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Such strength
in such a sweet mermaid. May your "dark night of the soul" pass forever into the light.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on March 23, 2008 at 10:07 AM
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Faith has such a powerful way of righting the course. I like the imagery from the dire depths of darkness to the realization of the
LIGHT! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 23, 2008 at 6:46 AM
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I agree with your philosophy here !
posted by
afzal50
on March 23, 2008 at 2:39 AM
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Awesome!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 23, 2008 at 12:45 AM
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Very Lovely
I have to say, I am impressed
Now I know what place I can go when I'm feeling a little discouraged.
posted by
jpart122500
on March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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And yes. I must keep a copy of this poem. Can I?
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 22, 2008 at 11:09 PM
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PurpleM, a lady with an enigmatic and charismatic countenace like
yours have to boune back and ride the tide of waves of life with great fervor and glee. Isn't that right, my dearest? Here
and mermaid
s for you
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 22, 2008 at 11:07 PM
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PurpleMermaid 11
Lovely poem and picture luv, well expressed.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 22, 2008 at 10:09 PM
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Wow Mermaid, this is an amazing poem. You have tapped into your pain and produced a heart wrenching tale of triumph over the chains of chaos. You have truly found your voice princess. Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on March 22, 2008 at 9:15 PM
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Redemption!
Even the gates of hell can't seperate us from his love! Breathtakingly poignant!
posted by
metalrat
on March 22, 2008 at 8:41 PM
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very true words so well expressed darling.
posted by
Kabu
on March 22, 2008 at 8:03 PM
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Daylight dawns! Self-examination concluded! Well related!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 22, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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Read my matrimonial column.....Now I am hirng some one to marry me.
posted by
Star5_
on March 22, 2008 at 6:04 PM
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My goodness but this roars with such power and passion. This is by far, one of the most strongest poems you've written with your voice so enriched as one with experience, a sage visited by stripes and then redeemed. This is awesome ~ take a breath and take a bow ~ my heart is tipped
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 22, 2008 at 5:18 PM
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Marvelous...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 22, 2008 at 4:49 PM
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