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This is one helluva journey! Great!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 23, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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Your work is so poignant and rich. Wonderful
posted by
briarwood
on March 23, 2008 at 9:34 PM
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Beautiful yet Passionate..
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 23, 2008 at 8:09 PM
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Nice
Very well written, and thank you for your comment on my piece as well.
posted by
jpart122500
on March 23, 2008 at 7:47 PM
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A beautiful poem,
lulling and rolling, with a sense of eternity in it...
I, of course, blushed&giggled at a word "undie", but it's just my kinky imagination, I suppose ;)
posted by
hagi
on March 23, 2008 at 2:45 PM
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wow. happy Easter
posted by
RomaKay
on March 23, 2008 at 1:01 PM
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seven times seven stars died not knowing the life and it's mysteries.....
posted by
Star5_
on March 23, 2008 at 12:03 PM
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Very nice ....
I will have to read this again. Thank you and I hope you have a lovely Easter.
posted by
VictoriaP
on March 23, 2008 at 10:29 AM
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The imagery is deeply rooted and takes me down different avenues, some almost simultaneously. I was enamored with the ending because the length of the poem is almost ironic to its meaning. Conciseness in length is actually quite brilliant my dear friend! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 23, 2008 at 10:28 AM
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Oh this is very poignant - very rich and prolific with much --- Elyse
(the 7 x 7 - a perfect number - infinity ) I think of the 7 often.
posted by
elysianfields
on March 23, 2008 at 8:53 AM
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Intense and beautiful!
posted by
Ariala
on March 23, 2008 at 6:03 AM
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