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I loved it!!
posted by
KaBooM62
on April 3, 2008 at 10:14 PM
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Very very original keep on. The twists of the story was in itself a knitting pattern!
posted by
chiq
on March 29, 2008 at 2:48 AM
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nicely done ... you sure do know how to spin a yarn
posted by
jefco
on March 28, 2008 at 7:54 AM
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You are so fun, creative and spontaneous...fresh~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 27, 2008 at 2:53 PM
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Nicely choreographed piece! The plot is very original!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 26, 2008 at 9:19 AM
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second sam
I second sam! what a wonderful flash fiction piece! I felt a part of the story and knew the minute the needle was discovered missing that it was David's end.
posted by
kmer
on March 23, 2008 at 4:35 PM
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What a fantastic short story. sam
posted by
sam444
on March 23, 2008 at 12:57 PM
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Very interesting story
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 23, 2008 at 11:44 AM
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Excellent!
So this Dete
ctive Rosey Grier (who knits) solved the case in this flash suspense story. You've made your protagonist's the bad guy. Yet, we
sympathize with him. Also, the good guy that's the detective's the antagonist. The knitting motif works.
posted by
BC-A
on March 23, 2008 at 9:33 AM
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