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Very nice poem Zack. I want to head for the beach and throw all my cares into the ocean! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 24, 2008 at 5:59 AM
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Far Far away.......I want to go tomorrow, but I may have to hold up for
another day.......But have to go, otherwise these two boys will be running around here every moment....
posted by
Star5_
on March 23, 2008 at 8:00 PM
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I think most readers agree with you! This joyride isn't working out! Time for change!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 23, 2008 at 7:59 PM
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Reminds of happy moments we all dream to have !
posted by
afzal50
on March 23, 2008 at 6:38 PM
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Did you have a good trip? sounds like ~ ah respite, always great for the soul and nature ~ Wonderful writing
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 23, 2008 at 5:55 PM
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