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the hard not really listening, so I work hard to learn new way blessingness
posted by
Mystereo
on January 19, 2010 at 4:48 PM
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Nothing isn't fair for I said that the way it is and for one learned the
posted by
Mystereo
on January 19, 2010 at 4:46 PM
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man, do I know this feeling!
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on March 26, 2008 at 1:02 PM
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These sad days are a beckoning call to the happiest days ahead. Move on, keep going even if you think it is leading you to nowhere, but God sure knows where you have to be. Lovely imgery to paint melancholy.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 25, 2008 at 10:35 PM
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Sinome,
I can chime in and say that God cares but I have read enough of your work to know that you already understand the same...I always thought that I would be angry at God without end if a Loved one were taken away...as I said before, when Mom was still alive, she seemed not to be 'here' after her heart attack...it was as if she was gone even before she passed away...I was most angry with God during the time Mom was like a young child in her actions and reactions following her attack...but that anger passed...forgive my word danse through Mom's story; at the moment the best way I can think of to say to you that you have not been abandoned by God although the emptiness you feel cannot be justified until you have had time to bear your pain in the individual way which tears grievously at everyone's Heart at some personal point in time.
Take care Ted
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 25, 2008 at 4:58 PM
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Sinome
I feel sad luv, but I do know God cares
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 25, 2008 at 9:03 AM
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Life has a way of unfolding in unexpected ways my dear Sinome
if he's gone he wasn't right for you and surely the pain passes and a new door will open; thank you for an excellent read
posted by
mariaki
on March 25, 2008 at 3:48 AM
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Sinome, I have a feeling that God cares. He just doesn't interfere in the choices that we make.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 25, 2008 at 3:11 AM
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emptiness
i feel your emptiness for love lost. one door closes and another will open. have faith.
posted by
bluebossa
on March 25, 2008 at 1:39 AM
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I am sorry
While going through the postings, I did not come across any of your entry and that was why I could not read and comment on your poems. Please excuse me.
This is a nice poem, Marta.
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 24, 2008 at 10:50 PM
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Stunning imagery, just communicate with our Father, He knows your needs before you ask. sam
posted by
sam444
on March 24, 2008 at 9:03 PM
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have a heart to heart talk....god always care. you still have the chance
to hold the same hands......
posted by
Star5_
on March 24, 2008 at 8:38 PM
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Brillant mixture!
Of rain and pain of the heart..Time will heal and bring the sun..lovely words and imagery..well written.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 24, 2008 at 8:38 PM
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Rain pours love drops, look through it, feel it, and have it.....
posted by
Star5_
on March 24, 2008 at 8:30 PM
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The Sun shall rise in your heart & mind in time..He always does ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 24, 2008 at 8:26 PM
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ahhh simone, there is pain that only time, as your poetry states, will heal
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posted by
VictoriaP
on March 24, 2008 at 8:10 PM
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Memories are brutal...
...and beautiful. What would we do without them and how do we live with them? I feel your struggle, Sinome. You express it so beautifully and poignantly and powerfully! Hang in there and don't give in to despair!~Charles
posted by
metalrat
on March 24, 2008 at 8:03 PM
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brilliant comparison
of weather and mood, love
posted by
BC-A
on March 24, 2008 at 6:44 PM
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You touch my heart so easily - I love reading your poems !
posted by
afzal50
on March 24, 2008 at 6:31 PM
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Ah Sinome...how you touch my heart ~ angel --- And this line especially:
should have bottled our moments, way back when, it absolutely tugs upon my heart. ~
u and keep writing ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 24, 2008 at 5:39 PM
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