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I can almost feel you again...
Beautiful....
posted by
Inspired8
on March 27, 2008 at 4:11 PM
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Purple Mermaid
This is a lovely flowing and well written poem. God bless you.
posted by
Justi
on March 27, 2008 at 8:18 AM
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There is a universal note to this poem, Mermaid... Very nice...
posted by
saul_relative
on March 27, 2008 at 6:50 AM
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Lovely
Distance makes for a challenge but it can be conquered, with luck and love.
posted by
Azur
on March 27, 2008 at 4:59 AM
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Hi sweetie, beautiful as ever love, and so sad. You do not need anyone but yourself dear to be happy. Take care of you and be well :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 26, 2008 at 10:27 PM
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you will survive,
posted by
Star5_
on March 26, 2008 at 7:56 PM
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Absolutely!
Absence makes the heart grow fonder...but, we're also familiar with the saying, that if you let a butterfly go free and it returns to you, then it's yours. Nice!
posted by
metalrat
on March 26, 2008 at 7:46 PM
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Lovely work, dearest~
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on March 26, 2008 at 11:16 AM
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Jen, this is truly beautiful............
I do hope you are feeling better and stronger; we miss your presence; many blessings dear heart
posted by
mariaki
on March 26, 2008 at 3:11 AM
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I know the feeling, love. Sadly, my long distance love did not survive. I hope you are well again and can continue to write your wonderful poetry.
posted by
vogue
on March 26, 2008 at 2:36 AM
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I can feel the love here..
I can feel how much you care...it pours from the words and imagery..So very well written.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 25, 2008 at 9:34 PM
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This is beautiful ... I am thinking about you and
hoping you are ok
posted by
VictoriaP
on March 25, 2008 at 5:28 PM
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Making wonderful music
even when not together.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on March 25, 2008 at 3:23 PM
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Jen sweetie, the sincerity of your soul propagates light-years ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 25, 2008 at 2:19 PM
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Sincerity is something to cherish
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 25, 2008 at 1:25 PM
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Sincerity is indeed tested by time and space!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 25, 2008 at 10:57 AM
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This is marvelous. It will stand the test. I adore the eloquent imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 25, 2008 at 10:30 AM
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It's a wonderful love poem .
posted by
afzal50
on March 25, 2008 at 10:13 AM
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i feel your longing - in some ways i share it - powerfully written
posted by
jefco
on March 25, 2008 at 8:05 AM
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well said, amazingly beautiful....
posted by
Star5_
on March 25, 2008 at 7:07 AM
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Oh yes it does ~ This is so beautiful and just warms my heart this morning, as I head out into that turf of the unknown...distant from mine...this absolutely thrills me ~ Beautiful Jen...absolutely - hopeful and inspiring ~
Elyse
*God bless your day
posted by
elysianfields
on March 25, 2008 at 6:33 AM
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