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Re: I can just picture this Chris............
Hello mariaki--I hope you are ok? Thank you so much for your remarks-I simply tried to put to words-exactly what I saw! Thanks again.God bless.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 26, 2008 at 4:15 AM
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Re: The cat was an awesome touch!
Thank you so much wigopa! Yes-I'd forgotten I'd 'sat the cat face there'.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 26, 2008 at 4:13 AM
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Re: Thank you Elyse--So pleased you like it! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 26, 2008 at 4:12 AM
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I can just picture this Chris............
the cat waiting to pounce! The imagery is perfect! thank you my friend & God bless
posted by
mariaki
on March 26, 2008 at 3:19 AM
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The cat was an awesome touch!
Imagery was great as always.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 25, 2008 at 9:15 PM
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Ah yes...the cat - the prey - oh boy but do I know this one...I love your Haiku inspirations ~
so rich with the inspiration and the imagery...
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 25, 2008 at 4:47 PM
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Re: very nice and envisioning the scene you described is relaxing
I'm so pleased you found the vision-relaxing!Could have been so different! Chris.Haven't seen you on here for a while-good to know you're about! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 25, 2008 at 1:28 PM
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Re: I love the cat
Thanks a lot Kayzzaman!Her name is pickles-she's pretty good and sits and watches as I feed the Doves on the grass-but-a wild bird-a Robin-if she could she would------!Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 25, 2008 at 1:27 PM
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Re: Yes-Soul Builder-I could have written te final line-sooo differently!
Thank you .Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 25, 2008 at 1:24 PM
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Re: Mean ol' puddy tat!
Thank you so much cheugon! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 25, 2008 at 1:23 PM
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very nice and envisioning the scene you described is relaxing
posted by
quietguy7
on March 25, 2008 at 12:01 PM
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I love the cat
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 25, 2008 at 11:47 AM
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Passive until he strikes! Bad cat!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 25, 2008 at 11:31 AM
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Mean ol' puddy tat!
I love it! Excellent!
posted by
metalrat
on March 25, 2008 at 10:35 AM
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