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I like how you spell out the conflict and resolution is so fixed in the imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 25, 2008 at 7:25 PM
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Passionate and Powerful !
posted by
afzal50
on March 25, 2008 at 6:44 PM
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Now, this is positive release of anger!
Heed what the Terminator said in Terminator 3, "Anger is more useful than despair." Apparently, you write kick-ass verse when you're pissed! Write-on, girlfriend! Be kind to yourself!
posted by
metalrat
on March 25, 2008 at 2:44 PM
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very nice, my friend... all too painful
Don't lose faith in humanity, Seeds. There can still be some unrotten apples in the bunch.
posted by
CunningLinguist
on March 25, 2008 at 1:50 PM
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Very well compsed with some poetical twists
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 25, 2008 at 12:30 PM
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