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Thank you for your concern Mr. Ash :)
Don't worry all is well...problem solved. It was just a really bad fight....but we all know how those. And we wouldn't have fought if we didn't care. I think it was more the fact that it was our first real blow out fight that caused me to write that poem. I had never been hurt by him before. But all is perfect and well. Right after i sent him that poem and he says to me....my stephanie, you are always the writer first.  Like every good writer knows....our best pieces come from our own experiences and the world we live in.

posted by serendipity09 on March 27, 2008 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply

awesome piece ash and yes hopefully some people will realize this fact

posted by quietguy7 on March 27, 2008 at 3:02 PM | link to this | reply

I adore the lesson in this poem and the hope for a positive change that is beneficial to both sides! sam

posted by sam444 on March 27, 2008 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you all..glad you're enjoying my poetry..makes my journey that much..
more rewarding..will keep in touch ! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on March 27, 2008 at 9:30 AM | link to this | reply

You are so right Ash! A wonderfull-encouraging piece! Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 27, 2008 at 7:38 AM | link to this | reply

i second dear bhaskar my friend Ash...keep it up...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 27, 2008 at 4:40 AM | link to this | reply

A wonderful, wonderful message, asf
Keep it up!

posted by Bhaskar.ing on March 26, 2008 at 10:37 PM | link to this | reply

posted by tyleness on March 26, 2008 at 10:32 PM | link to this | reply

Ash, I always look forward to your poetry, full of wisdom that is so peaceful and soothing and inspiring.  El

posted by elysianfields on March 26, 2008 at 9:36 PM | link to this | reply

Great wisdom!
Wise words from a wise man..Nicely done!

posted by Wigopa_ on March 26, 2008 at 9:29 PM | link to this | reply

Yes Ash, you are so right....

posted by Star5_ on March 26, 2008 at 7:50 PM | link to this | reply

Ha ha ha...you are one funny man...
please ASH!! I owe more than majority (if that's possible) of my progress to you! And I would never dream of switching roles!! You have taught me so much, about poetry, adn through your writing about like...This poem for example...insightful poem by the way. But thank you. It's weird I didn't feel Serendipy was much of a good poem....but all you guys seemed to like it better than the others. Talk about Irony. Anyway thank you for the comment. You are in my prayers as you travel the wide world!

posted by serendipity09 on March 26, 2008 at 7:47 PM | link to this | reply

Ash ~.~
Very wise advice -- very well written. Thank you for sharing. Peace and blessings.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on March 26, 2008 at 7:17 PM | link to this | reply