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moMMas you give me great pleasure in your being
posted by
mysteria
on March 28, 2008 at 3:36 PM
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Re: Happy Happy Friday..
I love this picture it looks so refreshing
posted by
Lanetay
on March 28, 2008 at 12:09 PM
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purple
you are so right and I love that pic
posted by
Lanetay
on March 28, 2008 at 12:09 PM
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that is the most beautiful moonlight picture.
posted by
Kabu
on March 28, 2008 at 10:50 AM
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Purple
I feel you pouring you soul into each word you write....
posted by
Troosha
on March 28, 2008 at 7:27 AM
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Happy Happy Friday..
Sue
posted by
Star5_
on March 28, 2008 at 6:38 AM
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A masterpiece dear Jen..........
I hope you are getting better and stronger every day my dear; take care
posted by
mariaki
on March 28, 2008 at 5:14 AM
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Wow! Very well done, Mermaid!
Quite haunting in the imagery, actually. Good work!
posted by
strat
on March 28, 2008 at 5:06 AM
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Your pics complement your poetry so nicely. It's always a joy to read you.
posted by
vogue
on March 28, 2008 at 3:12 AM
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definite imagery going on here!
We both had ships on the mind today, girl! Good job!
CEE
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on March 28, 2008 at 12:46 AM
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Hello the Purple, I love the way you glide
The words were simply very eloquent and evocative, my dear. Blessings to you
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 27, 2008 at 11:44 PM
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Love it
great rythmn and feeling
posted by
Loribeth215
on March 27, 2008 at 11:40 PM
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You are very beautiful
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on March 27, 2008 at 9:50 PM
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i think this is awesome
there is some real power in some of this verse!! its like you've found a groove and it keeps getting better.......
hope all is well
posted by
jefco
on March 27, 2008 at 9:45 PM
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Simply Beautiful!
An Amazing work! Very well done!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 27, 2008 at 9:25 PM
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Awe I love Jim Croce
It was so sad when back in September 20, 1973 he was killed in a small commercial plane crash. I remember roller skating to his songs at the local skating rink - Bad, Bad Leroy Brown and others
posted by
Rhisiart_Inside_Out
on March 27, 2008 at 9:13 PM
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Sweet Mermaid, what an amazing poem. With every day your poetry gets better and better, deeper, more meaningful and profound. This was so sincere and touching , and that song is my very favorite one in the whole world. Thank you so much for an amazing experience. Feel better OK? and take it easy, sometimes this heartfelt pieces take a lot out of one
posted by
Sinome
on March 27, 2008 at 8:00 PM
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beautiful
Give every moment your best…
We’ll never know
When things might change its flow
posted by
Star5_
on March 27, 2008 at 7:46 PM
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Nothing remains constant in this life so does pain and darkness .
posted by
afzal50
on March 27, 2008 at 7:00 PM
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My dear daughter, how are you truly doing? mom
posted by
sam444
on March 27, 2008 at 5:27 PM
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Lovely & serene, Jen dear..good to see u r healing ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 27, 2008 at 5:25 PM
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i love the night, there is no need to hide, everything is there to see, but noone can see it!
posted by
RomaKay
on March 27, 2008 at 3:45 PM
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Excellent portrayal of change - to change - and the beauty and passion and depth in which you write always - never - ceases to amaze me, Jen. This is one of your finer ~ Wisdom packed
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 27, 2008 at 3:07 PM
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Beautiful beautiful so beautiful!! I've always noticed this in life. Things will be going so good....everything so great...and then disaster happens....and it feels like nothing good ever existed. And then with time the terribleness ebbs away...and another wonderfeul period of life begins. I've decided this is the realy cycles of life...how everything changes. You never know WHEN it will happen...but you know it WILL happen.
posted by
serendipity09
on March 27, 2008 at 2:44 PM
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