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Chris---I came back to read this one again. I really think this one is
by far my favorite of your most recent work.  You capture the moment of birds in flight so vividly.  I love it.

posted by FineYoungSinger on April 4, 2008 at 5:33 PM | link to this | reply

Re: u mean the sparrow got onto the dove's back?
No-the Sparrow was flying beneath the Dove-but very close!Almost protected from the wind-and-making good use of the Doves wing power! Thank you Straightforward! Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 29, 2008 at 10:54 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you Super Sonic! Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 29, 2008 at 10:52 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you Soul Builder! Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 29, 2008 at 10:51 AM | link to this | reply

Re: So kind of you and thank you so much Elyse! Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 29, 2008 at 10:50 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lovely imagery
Hi bluehands-many thanks indeed! Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 29, 2008 at 10:49 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I just love your haiku.
That's kind of you-Thank you so much FineYoungSinger! Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 29, 2008 at 10:48 AM | link to this | reply

Re: scramble
Glad you like it Lilane.Thank you.Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 29, 2008 at 10:47 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Many thanks wigopa! Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 29, 2008 at 10:46 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you so much Sam! Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 29, 2008 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

u mean the sparrow got onto the dove's back?

posted by Straightforward on March 29, 2008 at 6:44 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on March 28, 2008 at 9:26 PM | link to this | reply

Both hunters.... evaders!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 28, 2008 at 8:29 PM | link to this | reply

those little sparrow...this was cool...like the 'tandem' ---- i love your Haiku moments ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 28, 2008 at 6:45 PM | link to this | reply

lovely imagery

posted by thecryptkeeper on March 28, 2008 at 1:54 PM | link to this | reply

I just love your haiku.

posted by FineYoungSinger on March 28, 2008 at 1:48 PM | link to this | reply

scramble
the thought of that is so cute

posted by Lanetay on March 28, 2008 at 12:12 PM | link to this | reply

A very cute little scene..Nicely done!

posted by Wigopa_ on March 28, 2008 at 10:10 AM | link to this | reply

I simply adore this one. Congratulations!  sam

posted by sam444 on March 28, 2008 at 9:19 AM | link to this | reply