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Chris---I came back to read this one again. I really think this one is
by far my favorite of your most recent work. You capture the moment of birds in flight so vividly. I love it.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on April 4, 2008 at 5:33 PM
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Re: u mean the sparrow got onto the dove's back?
No-the Sparrow was flying
beneath the Dove-but very close!Almost protected from the wind-and-making good use of the Doves wing power! Thank you Straightforward! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 29, 2008 at 10:54 AM
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Re: Thank you Super Sonic! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 29, 2008 at 10:52 AM
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Re: Thank you Soul Builder! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 29, 2008 at 10:51 AM
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Re: So kind of you and thank you so much Elyse! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 29, 2008 at 10:50 AM
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Re: lovely imagery
Hi bluehands-many thanks indeed! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 29, 2008 at 10:49 AM
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Re: I just love your haiku.
That's kind of you-Thank you so much FineYoungSinger! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 29, 2008 at 10:48 AM
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Re: scramble
Glad you like it Lilane.Thank you.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 29, 2008 at 10:47 AM
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Re: Many thanks wigopa! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 29, 2008 at 10:46 AM
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Re: Thank you so much Sam! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 29, 2008 at 10:45 AM
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u mean the sparrow got onto the dove's back?
posted by
Straightforward
on March 29, 2008 at 6:44 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on March 28, 2008 at 9:26 PM
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Both hunters.... evaders!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 28, 2008 at 8:29 PM
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those little sparrow...this was cool...like the 'tandem' ---- i love your Haiku moments ~

Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 28, 2008 at 6:45 PM
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lovely imagery
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on March 28, 2008 at 1:54 PM
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I just love your haiku.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on March 28, 2008 at 1:48 PM
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scramble
the thought of that is so cute
posted by
Lanetay
on March 28, 2008 at 12:12 PM
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A very cute little scene..Nicely done!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 28, 2008 at 10:10 AM
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I simply adore this one. Congratulations! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 28, 2008 at 9:19 AM
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