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True love hurts more than anything.
But it feels better than anything at the same time.
posted by
serendipity09
on March 29, 2008 at 6:24 PM
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Purple Mermaid
Dear sweet girl. Anyone worth keeping will stay on their own. Be blessed, anyone would be blessed to be chosen by you.
posted by
Justi
on March 29, 2008 at 3:22 PM
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My dear Jen, you present a most ponderous thought through eloquent imagery. I think the calling cards are very good right now, the more you attempt to read and comment the longer it will take to get to full strength. Rest your eyes please. mom
posted by
sam444
on March 29, 2008 at 10:48 AM
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Superb love poem !
posted by
afzal50
on March 29, 2008 at 9:19 AM
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It's sometimes difficult to find that balance - to love yet not give up ourselves or the essence of who wer are in the process. I remember years back hearing
love shouldn't be that difficult and although at that stage in my life I didn't completely buy into the idea, I now believe that to be true.
posted by
Troosha
on March 29, 2008 at 7:38 AM
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Great comment by cheugon. Don't torture yourself, love, it isn't easy to let go but when the bar of soap is finished... Beautiful poem as ususal. I'm happy to see that you are obviously better.
posted by
vogue
on March 29, 2008 at 3:16 AM
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Wish you all the Best, mermaid
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 28, 2008 at 11:09 PM
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Beautiful poem to the man you love, its simply touching, but sweetie, just love him with an open hand, if he is yours he will stay if he is not, why would you want him? You are so beautiful inside and out, you should be adored and revered.Just feel better and be happy.
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2008 at 10:28 PM
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Hope you feel better........never be afraid of loosing any one you love,
that's self doubt.......If you love some one, they will always in your heart, just love as them...
posted by
Star5_
on March 28, 2008 at 8:46 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on March 28, 2008 at 8:26 PM
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Love is like a bar of soap...
...the harder you squeeze, the more it slips away! Great poem with a wise moral!
posted by
metalrat
on March 28, 2008 at 7:44 PM
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this is so moving... a plea of the heart!
posted by
RomaKay
on March 28, 2008 at 7:20 PM
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Jen --- this is so moving...and I as a reader, am convinced that your heart carries so much passion and depth that any one near you would be assured of your incredible gift of Love ~ this is so powerful and moving...
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 28, 2008 at 6:51 PM
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Lovely tribute to a loved one ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 28, 2008 at 6:29 PM
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Fantastic...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 28, 2008 at 6:26 PM
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This is so beautiful, PurpleMermaid. It brought tears to my eyes to read it....
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on March 28, 2008 at 6:22 PM
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