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Hey Steve, I got a couple of them read, Scrounging Poet Dumpsters and Morning Air, and skimmed over the Buck poems. I am a bit tired from reading tonight but I wanted to read once, then read out loud and offer suggestions. I like Scrounging Poets Dumpsters just on the quick first read. I will get some work done in the morning.  sam

posted by sam444 on March 31, 2008 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

a funny fear i feel. i like the tone of your words, making me feel there's something too fear, yet taken in an urge to feel it as right.

posted by pelagus on March 30, 2008 at 1:53 PM | link to this | reply

Very imaginative poem.  sam

posted by sam444 on March 30, 2008 at 10:49 AM | link to this | reply