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It seems as if you are feeling my pain
Every word is a reflection of my own pain...beautifully written!
posted by
WesterinkElmarie
on March 31, 2008 at 1:07 PM
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True passion here
and pain presented in relief. I have just been reading through your recent entries.
The longing shows too.
posted by
Azur
on March 31, 2008 at 1:20 AM
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So palpable with passion and pain, yes - this is so passionately written, stunning and moves me
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 30, 2008 at 7:51 PM
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So painfull-I felt I was watching a 'scene' in a film! Thank you for sharin
Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 30, 2008 at 1:04 PM
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heartbreaking I felt as though I was standing, watching war played out
posted by
Kabu
on March 30, 2008 at 12:50 PM
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A most excellent poem with great passion as soulspeaker has stated. sam
posted by
sam444
on March 30, 2008 at 11:07 AM
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Kayzzaman ~.~
...deeply passionate -- such sadness and pain in the face of love. Thank you for sharing. Peace and blessings.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 30, 2008 at 9:38 AM
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Heartbreak is the greatest sweetness love can offer !
posted by
afzal50
on March 30, 2008 at 9:07 AM
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Heartbreak is the greatest sweetness love can offer !
posted by
afzal50
on March 30, 2008 at 9:07 AM
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a moving rendition..lovely
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on March 30, 2008 at 6:13 AM
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Kayzzman, wow...very intense...hope the person begins to respect
and return such love!
posted by
Ariala
on March 30, 2008 at 5:43 AM
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