Go to Rhisiart Peculiar Poet
- Add a comment
- Go to My Minds Eye - What Do I See
"Creativity, personality and character I share" That you do Richard and that is what endears you to me. I just am vundevawed (new word, poetic license here
) by your immensely rewarding verse(s) - and you know what, I did not know this rhymed...I read through it (aloud) and blew me away when I read a comment about the rhyme...went back and re-read and wow, took visual note that it rhymed. THat is how well you did with rhyming ~ Vundavaw!
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 2, 2008 at 3:40 PM
| link to this | reply
I like your use of rhyme..
Not a fan of rhyming poems, as they can sometimes sound forced, but you do a good job here
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on March 31, 2008 at 10:38 AM
| link to this | reply
Very very compelling analysis. Thanks for reading and commenting on "Everglades". Praise from you is flattering indeed, but I will never reach your poetic level.
posted by
vogue
on March 30, 2008 at 3:57 PM
| link to this | reply
I just flat love it! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 30, 2008 at 12:29 PM
| link to this | reply