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Re: Vickip
Thank you for the great comments and for stopping in! Nice to meet you.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 31, 2008 at 10:52 PM
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Re: Bhaskar.ing
Thank you for the totally awesome comment! Great to see you! Thanks again!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 31, 2008 at 10:02 PM
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How did I miss this ....
I loved being so involved in poetry ... beautifully written. I will definitely check back for more ...
posted by
VictoriaP
on March 31, 2008 at 10:01 PM
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wigopa
A superlative beauty in the way you narrated in your exquisite poem. Today I have read so many good poetry that my day is sure made. Well done!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 31, 2008 at 9:43 PM
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Re: Soul_Builder101
Thank you! Glad you like it!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 31, 2008 at 9:37 PM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you for the cool comment..I am glad you liked it..Thank you soo much..
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 31, 2008 at 9:29 PM
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Re: Kabu
Thank you for the awesome comment. Nice to see you on this one..I will get more horsey ones up on the other one soon!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 31, 2008 at 9:27 PM
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Simply beautiful poem! Loved it!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 31, 2008 at 9:27 PM
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Re: Decshak
Thank you for the great comments and for stopping in. Nice to meet you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 31, 2008 at 9:09 PM
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Re: Sam444
I knew you would! Great to see you. Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 31, 2008 at 9:05 PM
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Re: ibelieve
Thank you! Nice to meet you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 31, 2008 at 9:00 PM
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Absolutely beautiful! I loved this story, so well written and using amazing imagery. Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on March 31, 2008 at 8:57 PM
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this is a completed story so romantic so beautifully told. Wow
posted by
Kabu
on March 31, 2008 at 8:08 PM
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wigopa-this is a Beautifull piece!I was 'carried along' and could almost
see the scenes forming-from your words! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 31, 2008 at 1:31 PM
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Nice. Romantic. Clean and clear. I'll be back.
posted by
WindTapper
on March 31, 2008 at 9:00 AM
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I got the gist of the concern, I have a warrior myself! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 31, 2008 at 6:52 AM
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Warrior
Very endeavoring.
Makes you think you are there. Good Job.
ibelieve
posted by
Theresa_Poetry
on March 31, 2008 at 6:42 AM
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Re: Whirlwindaffair
Thank you for the great comments and for stopping in!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 30, 2008 at 10:35 PM
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Re: Elyse
Thank you! I can only hope that one day it does happen. I thank you with my
for placing me in your prayers.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 30, 2008 at 10:35 PM
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Re: Ash
Thank you! I pray that it does one day too. Hope you are having fun.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 30, 2008 at 10:33 PM
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so catching .. the flow of words,gives you a sense of anticipation
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on March 30, 2008 at 10:02 PM
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This just kept me from line to line, looking with you - this is powerful ~ I pray your Warrior's Love comes quickly ~
Elyse
(the imagery is fantastic)
posted by
elysianfields
on March 30, 2008 at 8:41 PM
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Marion, this is lovely..hope & pray this comes true for you ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 30, 2008 at 8:14 PM
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