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so sweet.
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on March 31, 2008 at 9:19 PM
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Rose with petals plucked! A fitting conclusion for a playing rose!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 31, 2008 at 8:55 PM
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painting with words
and doing it so comfortably.
great job
posted by
twomany
on March 31, 2008 at 8:34 PM
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The imagery is just stunning!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 31, 2008 at 8:13 PM
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it makes me think of a very young girl going to her first party with boys.
full of beauty full of promise.
posted by
Kabu
on March 31, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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I Love the last line! I think it made understand the rest of the poem. At least I hope I understand it
posted by
serendipity09
on March 31, 2008 at 3:53 PM
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Most excellent. The imagery is wonderful! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 31, 2008 at 2:11 PM
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I Love it! Absolutely wonderfull Kayzzaman! Chris.
ps.it's not 'flirting' but it's little and beautifull!
posted by
Scramble
on March 31, 2008 at 1:47 PM
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That was awesome!
posted by
SomeoneElse
on March 31, 2008 at 10:46 AM
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very good work here!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on March 31, 2008 at 10:35 AM
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this is pretty
i love the fresh feeling coming out of your words 
posted by
pelagus
on March 31, 2008 at 8:15 AM
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Wow, this is excellent.
I love the tone, the visuals, the thoughts your poem conjours forth.
posted by
Original_Influence
on March 31, 2008 at 7:16 AM
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what a gorgeous setting, I see a vase with - a garden bearing - a flirty little rose ~ This is full of stunning imagery and depth -
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 31, 2008 at 6:43 AM
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Well done my friend
flows very well with great imagery; thank you
posted by
mariaki
on March 31, 2008 at 6:34 AM
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