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Poem, observation and advise all rolled into very little space. I like!!!
posted by
AardigeAfrikaner
on April 1, 2008 at 3:53 PM
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Thank you all for your wise comments ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 1, 2008 at 8:08 AM
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but I love my freedom, I don't like people yelling at me all the time.
posted by
Star5_
on March 31, 2008 at 10:32 PM
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Great poem Ash, Like your thoughts also... :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 31, 2008 at 9:22 PM
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I like your thinking in this very well written poem. sam
posted by
sam444
on March 31, 2008 at 3:08 PM
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I do so agree with you Ash! Really good writing! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 31, 2008 at 1:53 PM
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Very great wisdom ~ very poignant ~
~ Ash, I tip my heart to you - Ely
posted by
elysianfields
on March 31, 2008 at 11:13 AM
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Ash ~.~
This is great! ...very wise and true. Thank you for sharing. Peace and blessings.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 31, 2008 at 9:27 AM
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Ash
I dislike arrogant people and it's almost as if I can spot them a mile away. I also think there's a fine line between assertiveness and abrasiveness. Some people can assert themselves with grace and dignity while others (I know a few) go after what they want in such a crass manner. You get more with sugar than you do with salt - isn't that the old adage?
posted by
Troosha
on March 31, 2008 at 9:02 AM
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Completely random, but it made me think of the Fourth of July Independence Day and i LOVE the 4th of July, the fireworks and everything. I gues what I'm gettin at is every type of independence should be celebrated and cherished!
posted by
serendipity09
on March 31, 2008 at 8:38 AM
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Wonderful!!
I really enjoyed this poem, especially since I struggle with independence. Your poem was very clear and thought provoking. Thanks.
posted by
Kobriel
on March 31, 2008 at 8:17 AM
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