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what is more entrancing than a star? The poem that makes you value it.
posted by
Kobriel
on April 1, 2008 at 12:17 PM
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Some nice imagery and dialogue between stargazer and moon
One little criticism: the last line would have been more powerful if it incorporated the imagery to show that the returning stars' shining was appreciated instead of simply saying so.
Good effort!
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on April 1, 2008 at 9:29 AM
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Very nicely composed & written...picturesque & peaceful ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 1, 2008 at 8:13 AM
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Beautiful.......
Beautiful writing. Thanks very much for sharing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on March 31, 2008 at 9:54 PM
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Nicely familiar poem, lovely.
posted by
Sinome
on March 31, 2008 at 9:12 PM
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