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valley is happy, but is that child happy????
posted by
star4sky5
on April 2, 2008 at 6:39 AM
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bluehands
The medieval touch to this poignant tale is exquisite, and has made the poem soar high up on the wings of the eagle.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 1, 2008 at 9:08 PM
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Very nice story written in beautiful verse. I loved it! Write more!!!
posted by
Sinome
on April 1, 2008 at 8:49 PM
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Shailey ---this is awesome! Write on~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 1, 2008 at 7:56 PM
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Great Job, Shailey!
I love it!
posted by
CRShelley
on April 1, 2008 at 3:54 PM
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Has a medieval tinge. Lovely poem.
posted by
vogue
on April 1, 2008 at 2:13 PM
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This resembles the plot of a tale I read many moons ago! Great stuff!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 1, 2008 at 12:55 PM
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so true.....we can't force that which is moment by moment to be always. Very purely said
posted by
Kobriel
on April 1, 2008 at 12:29 PM
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That was absolutely Lovely! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 1, 2008 at 12:26 PM
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Well done, good work
posted by
Kayzzaman
on April 1, 2008 at 11:49 AM
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nice story
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on April 1, 2008 at 11:33 AM
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