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awesome
i switch between scary and lighter sometimes and really enjoyed this one.
posted by
meeks2
on May 7, 2008 at 8:53 PM
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Re:
check out the stuff posted in and around Sept. 2007 in "What you see , ain't really me" if you want to read some things that might make it hard to go to sleep tonight......
thanks again for reading and reviewing
posted by
twomany
on April 5, 2008 at 7:34 PM
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OK you scared me... but I liked it, Very nice.
posted by
Sinome
on April 5, 2008 at 7:23 PM
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Re: Skeered....
Apparently you have not read some of my darker thoughts.
thanks for reading and commenting.
posted by
twomany
on April 5, 2008 at 6:42 PM
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Re: Skeered...
.....no you're not,this fun little diddy wouldn't scare anyone.
posted by
twomany
on April 5, 2008 at 6:39 PM
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Such a dark, but captivating poem.
posted by
serendipity09
on April 5, 2008 at 7:50 AM
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well I am skeered too
<<<< hugging Elyse as she looks under her bed>>>>> Palpable terror in this piece. I loved it, I was riveted till the end
posted by
Sinome
on April 4, 2008 at 9:37 PM
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ohhh...i'm skeered
(looking under my bed now)...this is really good ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 4, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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This is very nice poem too! I made comments on
Scrounging Poet Dumpsters, Morning Air and
No time like the Present. sam
posted by
sam444
on April 4, 2008 at 9:12 AM
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