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and out goes everythin...
(to continue your poem)
and out goes everythin
that we wished away
posted by
Straightforward
on April 6, 2008 at 3:52 AM
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bluehands, I love changes in the weather. You have described the rainstorm that I love to watch from my doorway.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 5, 2008 at 8:06 PM
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I love how you bring the world into this piece...
it's a snapshot of spring from a very different perspective. Nice job!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on April 5, 2008 at 5:24 PM
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love your style
posted by
jefco
on April 5, 2008 at 5:04 PM
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Striking imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 5, 2008 at 4:50 PM
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You included most elements of rain here!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 5, 2008 at 4:30 PM
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