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A most excellent poem my dear daughter. I think I have been spelling Shae's name wrong. Please tell her I am so very sorry! mom
posted by
sam444
on April 9, 2008 at 9:43 AM
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Evocative and deep!
Lovely work, Purple Mermaid.
posted by
Katray2
on April 9, 2008 at 7:30 AM
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haven't we all been here.....
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on April 9, 2008 at 7:06 AM
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This is very touching Purple Mermaid
The yearning is clear
posted by
Azur
on April 9, 2008 at 5:01 AM
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Lonely doesn't come only with the darkness my dear Jen.......
we can be lonely anytime anywhere and surrounded by people; this is beautifully written and touches on a subject many fear to admit; thank you for sharing this excellent verse my friend; take care and God bless and I hope you are feeling better dear heart
posted by
mariaki
on April 9, 2008 at 3:45 AM
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Beautiful
I enjoyed reading this.
posted by
gracefulwitch1
on April 8, 2008 at 11:24 PM
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though I talk a whole lot, I don't have any more dreams.......so I don't
wonder about life any more, taking it every moment as it comes....being happy and pretending happy are not same.......I may be happy at times.....but I am not now, some thing just kills me inside of my heart.
posted by
Star5_
on April 8, 2008 at 10:32 PM
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Profound
This also gives me a question to ask, on why you haven't found that person yet?
posted by
jpart122500
on April 8, 2008 at 10:17 PM
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An excellent work!
I was deeply touched by this..as I too am looking for the one to complete me..Simpley beautiful Jen.
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 8, 2008 at 9:49 PM
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simply lovely
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 8, 2008 at 9:44 PM
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Jen
stopping in and finding this...so touching, moves my heart...very good and deep introspectively ~ very poignant, succinct~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 8, 2008 at 9:43 PM
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posted by
CRShelley
on April 8, 2008 at 9:23 PM
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I agree with vickip...
...and think this is one of your best! I'm always taking inventory of my life.
posted by
metalrat
on April 8, 2008 at 8:51 PM
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Excellent and painful
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on April 8, 2008 at 6:36 PM
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beautiful, as always ....
I think this is one of my favorites by you
posted by
VictoriaP
on April 8, 2008 at 6:24 PM
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Relustorlove my dear.........
have i ever told you how much you make me smile whenever i see your comments at my blogs my love? i like your daily share dear...thank you so much...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 8, 2008 at 6:17 PM
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purple
lonely always comes at night
posted by
Lanetay
on April 8, 2008 at 5:55 PM
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You have unique and original style of expression ! God bless you !
posted by
afzal50
on April 8, 2008 at 5:39 PM
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something special here !!
posted by
jefco
on April 8, 2008 at 5:04 PM
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