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your writings are very touching and wise
posted by
cmhnord
on April 11, 2008 at 2:33 PM
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Okay...
Again I ask, why aren't you happily with someone? As if your creativity and beauty isn't enough. Okay, I guess there realy is 4 sides to every heart, one telling you how I feel, another saying I really enjoyed this poem.
The rest...the words are indescribable as to which inspires and of what creates and onto an inspiration of work that I haven't created yet. Yet with this, I find rewarding as the winning hand
posted by
jpart122500
on April 10, 2008 at 10:41 PM
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Jen, so creative and so powerful in its emotion and message to convey...this is such good writing ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 10, 2008 at 8:41 AM
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I like this...you have quite the vocabulary. Impressive!
posted by
TerAmerica
on April 10, 2008 at 8:25 AM
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Presented so uniquely to an age old problem, the straying husband...ex...
posted by
Winged
on April 10, 2008 at 6:56 AM
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I think that is the most unique I have seen yet. Very very well done!!! And fun too!
posted by
majesticvisions
on April 10, 2008 at 3:52 AM
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Yes my dear Jen
but we can also "fix" the cards in our favour
Very cleverly done dear heart; I thoroughly enjoyed this read; thank you and God bless and sustain you in your recovery my friend
posted by
mariaki
on April 10, 2008 at 2:49 AM
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posted by
mysteria
on April 9, 2008 at 11:36 PM
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Let's Play Poker
This was a fun poem. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 9, 2008 at 11:08 PM
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How fun and cleaver
A joy to read - thank you
posted by
Rhisiart_Inside_Out
on April 9, 2008 at 9:26 PM
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I love poker (and poking) very clever verse....well done
posted by
jefco
on April 9, 2008 at 8:42 PM
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Fantastic Purple.
First I say this for you, and then for the poem, it's simply fantastic. I was glued and I was amazed. This I must re-read, or, better still, copy it for posterity. So loved it.
Bhaskar
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 9, 2008 at 8:29 PM
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Most excellent concept! Please do not worry I am just feeling the effect of a new medication regime. How are you? Give the kiddos a hug for me please! Love always, mom
posted by
sam444
on April 9, 2008 at 8:07 PM
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Well written poem and I agree with your statement !
posted by
afzal50
on April 9, 2008 at 6:48 PM
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posted by
CRShelley
on April 9, 2008 at 5:26 PM
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clever!
posted by
Halfelven
on April 9, 2008 at 5:15 PM
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