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"more, more, more!"
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 13, 2008 at 8:56 PM
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You do excellent writing
A job well done.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 13, 2008 at 8:55 PM
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i want MORE!
this is such an excellent story, but i'm completely frustrated... i would like more! 
posted by
pelagus
on April 13, 2008 at 9:11 AM
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Ahhhhh yes destiny. What is our destiny is what everyone is wondering....
posted by
majesticvisions
on April 13, 2008 at 4:40 AM
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Ok one of the definitions for ambiguous is: capable of being understood in two or more possible senses or ways
so with this in mind, I can see how this is 'clearly ambiguous' ~ good 
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 12, 2008 at 9:26 PM
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ok, you're teasing ~ a short story then huh? --- ok but, I have questions... this was a good write - but there must be more? or again, I reiterate, this is a 'short story' right? ~
(left pondering) Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 12, 2008 at 9:22 PM
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i got lost at the end my friend...how could she have felt elated after being brutalized and insulted like that? the story on how you describe each scenario though is compelling and very vivid...it's the conclusion that is rather confusing my dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 12, 2008 at 8:44 PM
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Strange ending to an amazing story, but unexpected, which is a plus. :-) Great post!!!
posted by
Sinome
on April 12, 2008 at 2:45 PM
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I am not certain I would reach that conclusion! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 12, 2008 at 2:32 PM
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