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sl you are in touch with so much with your bluehands
any advice for me a soul stricken by unrequited love...?
posted by
mysteria
on April 26, 2008 at 3:18 PM
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Nice work
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 26, 2008 at 11:13 AM
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Great feeling here!
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 25, 2008 at 8:25 AM
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just the thought of wanting something makes you feel so alive!
posted by
majesticvisions
on April 20, 2008 at 10:22 AM
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Love is a many splendoured thing my dear
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 14, 2008 at 10:37 PM
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bluehands
Well expressed love my friend
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 14, 2008 at 9:04 PM
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Lovely, lovely, poem
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 14, 2008 at 8:55 PM
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I read this to my husband....
he is a man of few words. He kissed me and walked away. I think you spoke what he could not find words for. Thank you
posted by
mikes_goddess
on April 14, 2008 at 1:22 PM
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love the intensity and yearning
posted by
quietguy7
on April 14, 2008 at 2:49 AM
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The imagery exudes passion. Well done indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 13, 2008 at 8:58 PM
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Passion in the words
Love between the lines. I tip my
to you
posted by
Kobriel
on April 13, 2008 at 8:18 PM
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So passionate and touching .. I like it .
posted by
afzal50
on April 13, 2008 at 6:48 PM
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