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very nice, children are our future  

posted by cmhnord on April 16, 2008 at 4:55 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Mermaid
I am sorry that your Mum isn't well. I hope she has a good recovery. Sending healing thoughts and strength. Be well!

posted by Norwood on April 15, 2008 at 3:15 PM | link to this | reply | report abuse

Hello my darling Shae, I was so happy when I saw a message from you. I am so happy you thought of reading and sending me comments. We can talk to each other everyday that you can. I am so sorry mommy isn't feeling well. I am so proud of you for taking care of her. We need her to rest more. And it will be fun for you to send messages to all the people that your mom loves. I am starting to think about a poem I will write for you (tell Stef I will write one for him too) and one day soon it will be on my blog for you. I was so happy to get your singing performance, I played it for my neighbor. She fell in love with you instantly, but I said, 'Hold on, that is my granddaughter. I love you so much honey! Say Hi to mom and Stef for me. Grandma

posted by sam444 on April 15, 2008 at 1:48 PM | link to this | reply | report abuse

Hello Purple Mermaid.You left a message on my post to tell me your Mom is
sick! Please tell me-who is your Mom? Also-please wish her well and hope she gets better real soon! God Bless.Thanks for telling me.Chris.

posted by Scramble on April 15, 2008 at 12:32 PM | link to this | reply | report abuse

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on April 15, 2008 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

"snaps" love this... the emotion is so strong and well placed! 

posted by RomaKay on April 15, 2008 at 3:55 PM | link to this | reply

Amen!
The children deserve so much better than we give them.

posted by metalrat on April 15, 2008 at 2:44 PM | link to this | reply

Purple

"Heard" and watched - as there is much to be learned by simply observing a child.  A beautiful piece!!!!

posted by Troosha on April 15, 2008 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

wonderful work, mermaid dearest~
 loved this !

posted by FineYoungSinger on April 15, 2008 at 7:26 AM | link to this | reply

This is beautiful...I love children. Thanks for sharing.

posted by Kolekshuns on April 15, 2008 at 7:06 AM | link to this | reply

I appreciate your thoughts and support for children !

posted by afzal50 on April 15, 2008 at 6:45 AM | link to this | reply

sexy single thank you all for reading my mom!!!

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on April 15, 2008 at 6:45 AM | link to this | reply

There is so much to be learned from children. If only we would take them more seriously and preserve some of the child that lives on in us thoughout adulthood.

posted by vogue on April 15, 2008 at 5:48 AM | link to this | reply

So very lovely sentiments and a fine message in the closing lines on children, Awesome work! Purple

posted by Bhaskar.ing on April 15, 2008 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully done

posted by lionreign on April 15, 2008 at 4:46 AM | link to this | reply

Jen, this is wonderful and yes so true............
children epitomize what we are and should be; let them be children as long as possible; there is plenty of time for adulthood; dear heart I see you have been overdoing it again, please take care and don't fret about not spending enough time visiting; concentrate on getting well first and foremost; God bless always

posted by mariaki on April 15, 2008 at 2:17 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful piece and yes we need to let the kids nowadays have a childhood
and not force them to grow up so fast

posted by quietguy7 on April 15, 2008 at 1:38 AM | link to this | reply

Such truth and wisdom sings from your verses here ~ beautiful and touching --- so touching.  This is so full of maternal love and wisdom and I know God blesses you for offering your gift to others.  Just very moving, this poem, Jen. Elyse

posted by elysianfields on April 14, 2008 at 8:13 PM | link to this | reply

purple mermaid
this is just the most beautiful poem. Children little gifts from God.

posted by whirlwindaffair on April 14, 2008 at 8:12 PM | link to this | reply