Go to Naked Pictures Of Voices In My Head, Again!
- Add a comment
- Go to STOLE YOUR SOUL!
Hi
I really like your poems, i can't write like that, but I can always read yours:)
posted by
edytka1974
on April 17, 2008 at 7:14 PM
| link to this | reply
That is absolutely Lovely CRShelley! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 17, 2008 at 3:08 AM
| link to this | reply
Great poem.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 17, 2008 at 1:38 AM
| link to this | reply
I like the movement in the rhyme
posted by
Greenfields
on April 17, 2008 at 12:06 AM
| link to this | reply
I love this (
shades of army of darkness)
scares me --- Oh its sad what can steal our souls ~ very good write
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 16, 2008 at 11:09 PM
| link to this | reply
very well put - still looking for the answer to all of the questions
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 16, 2008 at 10:37 PM
| link to this | reply
very nice
posted by
quietguy7
on April 16, 2008 at 10:17 PM
| link to this | reply
CRShelley
Dang this is good and should be put to music my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 16, 2008 at 10:09 PM
| link to this | reply
Brilliant staging of the imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 16, 2008 at 7:48 PM
| link to this | reply
How about all of the above ?..just kidding :)..nicely done ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 16, 2008 at 7:37 PM
| link to this | reply
Can't be stole.
A rose
from me!
posted by
Whacky
on April 16, 2008 at 7:26 PM
| link to this | reply
you've managed to make a dark poem light. love it a lot, nice job!!
posted by
RomaKay
on April 16, 2008 at 5:33 PM
| link to this | reply
this was written really beautifully, glorious!
posted by
kay_cee394
on April 16, 2008 at 4:42 PM
| link to this | reply