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You change my atmosphere!.... Very beautiful
posted by
edytka1974
on April 18, 2008 at 10:59 AM
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haha
thanks for stopping by!.... doing it or watching it? lol
nice to meet ya :)
posted by
TheWifey
on April 17, 2008 at 11:32 PM
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Hello my friend, I came back to let you know that my son was in my den when I was reading your poem and as with the others he liked the set up. His thoughts were at least one more nonet. I scrolled down your blog to show him that this is your preferred style. It is cool when at least three are involved but two is grand as well. My thought is to actually continue with this concept and invent a poetry style with what you have going so far. Good luck and I do hope you pursue this! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 17, 2008 at 7:38 PM
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Beautiful!
And I love the way you shaped the poem....two hearts.
posted by
metalrat
on April 17, 2008 at 6:20 PM
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You've a beautiful way with words in any form love.
posted by
BC-A
on April 17, 2008 at 3:07 PM
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Re: Double Nonet
Thanks Sam, I didn't realize that. I will work on correcting that. Thank you for teaching me about the form, I appreciate it. Cindy
posted by
cmhnord
on April 17, 2008 at 12:33 PM
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Well expressed!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 17, 2008 at 9:55 AM
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Hello my friend, I am glad your tried a double nonet. However, I the form is a bit different than what is written. When you write the first half of the nonet, you start with the nine syllables and work down to the one syllable, then you start with one syllable in the same poem and work your way up to nine. When you have completed the poem it gives it an hourglass effect. I hope this helps. Good luck. I believe you will find it an interesting challenge. Keep up the great work, I am enjoying your blog! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 17, 2008 at 9:17 AM
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cm
Nicely done!
posted by
Troosha
on April 17, 2008 at 8:13 AM
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you write very beautiful mam...i love the design mam...thank you for reading my mom...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 17, 2008 at 6:23 AM
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