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Steph dear, this is awesome..in real life though, always have some support
circle of family / friends / relatives that u can talk to..u'll be surprised how therapeutic that can be..u do not have to endure anything alone as u r never alone..take care sweetie ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 18, 2008 at 9:07 AM
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Better than great...
Moving and true. As someone who likes to write, I know too well how humanity pursues pain when we can't find anything else to fill the empty space inside. It is a strange fact about ourselves, and why we do it is something of a mystery. Your work explains very well the reason's why we shouldn't slip in this manner. It puts a little fight back into the person. Making this a valuable piece.
posted by
Kobriel
on April 18, 2008 at 6:40 AM
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Pain is a factor in life..Yet we need not let it lead the way..Excellent verse!
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 17, 2008 at 11:36 PM
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posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 17, 2008 at 9:46 PM
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posted by
CRShelley
on April 17, 2008 at 9:13 PM
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we all need attention even though sometimes we are to busy giving it to another! by the way great poem.
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on April 17, 2008 at 7:05 PM
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