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Oh I know the meaning of this all too well from my childhood days.
I send you this
to cheer you up. You are not alone.
posted by
cmhnord
on April 20, 2008 at 12:40 PM
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Its like just waiting for the end.
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 20, 2008 at 11:12 AM
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So true, so blue, great work.
posted by
Winged
on April 20, 2008 at 11:04 AM
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Well done! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 20, 2008 at 10:22 AM
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Your ending was both a pleasant surprise and a unique and eloquent way to tie the entire poem together. If I had a my own lit mag, I would want to publish it.
posted by
jmh256
on April 20, 2008 at 10:10 AM
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