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As I read this again
I have to say, this is something in which I think about very seldom. As we walk past so many, enough to never fully care to count the number...We stop and finally decide to say hello, as we may have chosen the perfect one. In a nice but thrilling ride this hit me, I thought I'd share...It makes me wonder if my Mother never passed my Father at that moment in time. The things we think about...
posted by
jpart122500
on April 25, 2008 at 10:33 PM
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Wow Jen, I can add any more but I sure endorse the comments. Striking! Shae is out doing a wonderful job again. We can be so very proud of her. A rose and a gem. How lucky can we get. Hello my Stef!
posted by
sam444
on April 21, 2008 at 1:46 PM
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Reads like 'the sad anatomy of a love affair'.
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 21, 2008 at 10:06 AM
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Purple
WOW! I truly enjoyed this piece.... so much behind a single word such as "hello" or "goodbye".
posted by
Troosha
on April 21, 2008 at 8:46 AM
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How to tell you how wise you are ?
posted by
afzal50
on April 21, 2008 at 8:28 AM
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To some it's so easy
Some people say hello and goodbye as if they are commenting on the weather. To me the very act of saying goodbye is like donating a body part...but sometimes you have to cut certain relationships out of your life...even though it might be so painful.
Thank you for your inspirational poetry!
posted by
WesterinkElmarie
on April 21, 2008 at 3:08 AM
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Love, the relationship beginning with a hello and ending in goodby is journey after journey to finding perfect love is so well expressed by dear Purple.
that is the Mermait of Blogitville
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 21, 2008 at 3:02 AM
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In our search for the perfect relationship we unfortunately go through
many of these hello to goodbye stages; excellent work my dear Jen; thank you and do take care
posted by
mariaki
on April 21, 2008 at 2:22 AM
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absolutely right
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 21, 2008 at 2:00 AM
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wow sweetie, I think this is one of your very best ...
and timely for me .... love this
posted by
VictoriaP
on April 20, 2008 at 10:47 PM
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I really enjoyed this
No need for a book, or a movie...Everything that was needed to express in this piece was done very well.
Missed you too
posted by
jpart122500
on April 20, 2008 at 8:50 PM
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Wow Jen ~ this has to be draining ~ such passion and emotion and reality all over the verse ~ Angel ~ You are a very wise one indeed
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 20, 2008 at 7:03 PM
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well spoken
a relationship from beginning to unhappy end
posted by
Loribeth215
on April 20, 2008 at 6:53 PM
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take time to look deeper, some time it may be good.......HAHAHA
posted by
Star5_
on April 20, 2008 at 6:44 PM
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hello dear one what a special talented and feeling dear you are.
posted by
Kabu
on April 20, 2008 at 6:33 PM
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purple
so sad but true
posted by
Lanetay
on April 20, 2008 at 6:31 PM
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Beautiful..
The circle of love..exquisitly done..Excellent work Jen.
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 20, 2008 at 6:06 PM
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