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I have no direct experience with corsets...
but its a poignant metaphor...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 6:48 PM
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Wow, this is poignant ~ and deep --- great writing
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 30, 2008 at 7:34 AM
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Re: LOVE IT
nice to see that-thanks so much
posted by
bumpsinaroad
on April 30, 2008 at 6:55 AM
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Re: I like this one very much!
thks!! very true!
posted by
bumpsinaroad
on April 30, 2008 at 6:54 AM
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you read poems well-thanks for a great review
so nice of you!!
posted by
bumpsinaroad
on April 30, 2008 at 6:53 AM
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thks-guess it was diff. than "interesting"
posted by
bumpsinaroad
on April 30, 2008 at 6:52 AM
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thnks-not really sure i understand though??
shakira like pop star shakira?
posted by
bumpsinaroad
on April 30, 2008 at 6:51 AM
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Wonderful!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on April 29, 2008 at 11:07 AM
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LOVE IT
To think of the corsette wearing you instead of the other way around is a great spin on reality.
posted by
fluidbeauty
on April 29, 2008 at 10:18 AM
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wonderfully expressed
posted by
pelagus
on April 29, 2008 at 8:11 AM
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nice job
posted by
cmhnord
on April 29, 2008 at 6:21 AM
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Wonderful work..
posted by
_Symphony_
on April 29, 2008 at 3:12 AM
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I like this one very much!
There is more than one interpretation possible... Fine work!
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on April 29, 2008 at 3:09 AM
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Guess that heroine diet is needed. You know like Shakira!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 28, 2008 at 7:30 PM
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Fabulous poem :-) Great concept too, anyone who has ever worn a corset knows exactly the feeling, but it could also be interpreted as images reflecting perhaps a controlling situation.... I'll stick with the factual though, and admire your amazing descriptive abilities . Great post!
posted by
Sinome
on April 28, 2008 at 7:28 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on April 28, 2008 at 7:18 PM
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Very nice job.
posted by
jmh256
on April 28, 2008 at 6:32 PM
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Poignant ! well written !
posted by
afzal50
on April 28, 2008 at 6:30 PM
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