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I can see it before me... Very dramatically, told in a no nonsense way...
But it's true poetry!
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on May 1, 2008 at 11:35 PM
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Very sad.
I always think it's best not to try and rekindle an old love, but to keep it tucked away safely, where we keep the memories that make up our lives...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 7:22 PM
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All we can do is hope that in losing one we make room ...
... for the right one. Thirty years is no easy hurdle to get over, however.
posted by
CunningLinguist
on April 29, 2008 at 9:09 AM
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Vicki
I believe that most of us who have lived a bit 'can' relate to trying to rekindle a love...and it just cannot be found. Thank you for your comment and always a pleasure having you come by
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on April 29, 2008 at 8:34 AM
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Troosha
Such high compliments coming from you really makes my day. A pleasure having you come by.
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on April 29, 2008 at 8:32 AM
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Sam
Well, thank you so much! And thanks for stopping in
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on April 29, 2008 at 8:31 AM
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Cm
I think most of us can relate to trying to rekindle an old flame. Thanks for coming by
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on April 29, 2008 at 8:31 AM
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Cheugon
Yep, exactly! He is a dear man however the 'love' thing dissipated in the many years of absence. Thank so much for dropping by
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on April 29, 2008 at 8:30 AM
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Time heals all wounds ... and in the process seems to use
a very potent numbing agent. This is great and I'm sure most of us can relate to it.
posted by
VictoriaP
on April 29, 2008 at 7:37 AM
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Seedlings
What a remarkable piece! Sometimes we just can't turn back the hands of time (as much as we try or want to). You described this reunion with a love who once as so perfectly.
posted by
Troosha
on April 29, 2008 at 7:31 AM
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I like this poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 29, 2008 at 6:33 AM
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how
I know the feeling all too well.
posted by
cmhnord
on April 29, 2008 at 6:18 AM
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Sounds like...
...trying to recapture something that was lost with a High School sweetheart. Hard to do. Nice try.
posted by
metalrat
on April 29, 2008 at 4:43 AM
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