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Very moving!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 2, 2008 at 8:21 PM
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Everybody has lessons to learn but, whether they head their warning is another thing. Peace to all, great write. From my
to your
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posted by
cmhnord
on April 30, 2008 at 5:15 PM
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Wonderful poem.
posted by
jmh256
on April 30, 2008 at 2:35 PM
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I adored the imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 30, 2008 at 1:01 PM
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Each second a grain of sand in the hourglass of our life. Nice poem. Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on April 30, 2008 at 12:27 PM
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Very nice!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on April 30, 2008 at 9:57 AM
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