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Excellent write--stark and haunting. I especially liked the voice, rhythm, and the visual presentation. Somehow I got the feeling of try to find a way out for a cave or tunnel, and then seeing a crack of light. I really like this one.
John
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jfm32
on May 5, 2008 at 3:20 PM
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well written indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 2, 2008 at 9:44 AM
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very true dear.....well said....
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__Purple_Mermaid11__
on May 1, 2008 at 11:14 PM
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